Note: Some of you may have seen this post before. I wrote it and tried to post it several weeks ago. For some reason, Word Press had fits with it. No matter how many times I tried to edit the post, it would not format correctly, resulting in a jumble of words and images. I had no choice but to delete the post. Now, I’m trying again.
There are a lot of connections, I think, between art and poetry. The Roman poet and satirist Quintus Horatius Flaccus — better-known simply as Horace — said that “A picture is a poem without words.” While I can see and feel connections, sometimes I don’t fully understand how to make those connections for myself. As someone who is much more comfortable with words than with images, I atruggle at times to express my thoughts through art.
I can, of course, look at a work of art and wax poetically about it. I can easily use words to describe what I see, what I feel, what thoughts and emotions a scene evokes for me. But the reverse — turning words into art — doesn’t come easily for me. I know. I’ve tried. And each time I’ve tried, I’ve fallen short in my estimation. While I love poetry, I’m not able to transpose it from literature to visual art.
One of my first experiences in connecting art and poetry was with the art journal process known as “blackout poetry”. It was simple enough, and it was fun. I didn’t come away from it with any great sense of accomplishment, though, no genuine feeling of pride in what I’d created, or even any real curiosity about how and why I created the “poem” I did.
Blackout poetry begins with a text. My project — done last October — was part of an art journaling box from Let’s Make Art. Included in the box was a print-out of two pages from Frankenstein. The idea is to black-out words, keeping only those you want for your poetry. It sounded interesting. It sounded fun. Yet for me, it was actually a bit of a challenge.
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I wrote about this experience before. Here are a few of my thoughts:
Although I love poetry and have written and published poetry in the past, doing this “black-out” version was an interesting experience. I think it’s partly because I have a problem thinking of any words as unnecessary, unwanted, or for the purposes of black-out poetry, useless.
Of course, it’s not so much about making a statement, creating a poetic masterpiece, or sharing deeply personal thoughts. It’s more about finding something hidden in plain sight, cutting through the noise to focus on single thoughts. It’s about minimalism, about finding meaning in small things.
To me, black-out poetry is still far-removed from visual art. Here, I was still working with words, not trying to depict thoughts through images.
So how does one go about illustrating a poem? After browsing around a bit, I came across I site that provides instruction on turning a poem into art. It’s a very simple process, really.
- Read the poem.
- Draw the picture.
- Color the picture.
All right, yes, I’m being a bit silly here, but that’s more or less what the site suggests.
For me, one of the difficulties in transposing from poetry to visual art is that poetry speaks in a language all its own. There is rhythm, stress, patterns, word play, and so many different poetic elements that don’t truly have correspondences in drawing or painting. We can suggest rhythm or mood in our art. We can use colors and symbolism to convey thoughts. But can we ever truly capture the “essence” of a poem? I don’t think so.
Poet John Ciardi once asked, “How Does a Poem Mean?”, sharing his thoughts in a book on poetry which was first published in 1959. The message of the book is that a poem is more than words, that there is always something communicated by a poem that can’t be explained in prose or translated into another art form, at least not without losing a large part of the poem’s true meaning.
All the same, I wasn’t about to let any of this stop me today. I wanted to play with art and poetry, so I turned again to what I’ve created in the black-out poetry project, and I used that as a starting point. After reading the poem several times, I focused on what I considered the most visual words and considered possible design elements. I thought about the colors I would use.
I began by making a lot of disjointed pencil marks on a sheet of watercolor paper. Next I brushed water onto the page and then poured on several colors of acrylic paint. I grabbed an old sponge and used it to create texture, then with a watercolor marker, I created a “natural” design, a bit like a leafy plant. And then, voila! The last stroke. I turned the painting upside down to see lightning streaking down.
SHATTERED IGNORANCE
In ignorance, early philosophers
Witnessed a storm behind the mountains.
Thunder burst with frightful loudness.
The heavens remained,
Watching with curiosity and delight.
A stream of fire
Light…vanished…disappeared.
Nothing remained.
Shattered
Singular
Not splintered,
But entirely destroyed.
Nature
Thunder
Lightning
Power
This last stroke…completed.
Are there any real connections between the art and the poetry? I don’t know. For that matter, is there any real meaning in the words? I don’t know that, either. All I know is that I love poetry, and I love art, as well. I want to find connections between them.
I haven’t heard of blackout poetry before. It has intrigued me. I think the artwork you have created complements the poetry you have written.
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Thanks. I’d never heard of it before last October when it was part of a “subscription box” for art journaling. I did a bit of searching online and learned that it’s very popular. It’s interesting… something fun to try. 🙂 Going back now and illustrating the poem in some way was fun, too.
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Thanks for sharing.
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Most welcome
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Black out poetry! Intriguing! I’m going to have a go! Thanks for sharing your art and poetry 💕
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There’s a previous post on the blog that provides a few links you might like.
https://artistcoveries.wordpress.com/2020/10/07/where-art-leads/
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There is a connection between art and poetry:
When I was creating poetry on LinkedIn twin sisters artists were impressed by my poetry, and they invited me to visit their art studio and commissioned me to create poems consistent with their abstract creations and paid all of my expenses and commission, and they said that my poems breathe life into their abstractions and I visit them to breathe life into their creations as needed!
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How interesting! I agree that there can be strong connections between art and poetry. I just haven’t been able to create those connections visually yet. I’m working on it. 🙂
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I can observe anything physical or abstract and create poetic words consistent with ‘whatever!”
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Yes, I can see art and put words to it. The opposite though — reading words and putting art to it — is difficult for me.
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anything you are weak in and to become strong in it, you must reverse you creative psychology akin to solving a dividing fraction, you must invert the last fraction and multiply the two factions not to mention the Imperative Sentence where the You is apart of the Sentence but not in the Sentence but understood!
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Interesting perspective.
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I enjoyed your post is every aspect of poetic respect!
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I wrote my Masters dissertation at Warwick on a collaboration between British Artist, Charlie Calder-Potts; Iranian poet, Rosa Jamali, based on the epic Persian poem, The Shah-Nama. It was great fun researching and writing it.
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Now that sounds like quite a project! It must have been fascinating.
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beginning of second line
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i’m definitely gonna try blackout poetry!
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It’s interesting. Let me know how it turns out for you!
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Very interesting approach! I usually paint the picture and then write a poem of how or what I feel about it. Sometimes I have done this separately and then realize they belong together. Enjoyed your post!
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Thanks. It was an interesting experiment — and I do want to do more “black-out poetry” in the future. I think what I like best is just writing thoughts on a sheet of paper, and then “covering them up” with colors and images. It makes it feel like I’m creating a “special message” behind the art — which is exactly what I’m doing — and even if I’m the only one who knows it’s there, it has meaning for me. That’s a “poetry/art” connection I hope to explore more.
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Keep us posted. I like the idea of “personal art”!
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🙂 I’m sure I’ll be posting “personal” art experiences in the future.
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